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Three

by JokeMeKisses 4 Reviews

FACT: It wasn’t the first time I had seen a string of police cars in the driveway of my parents’ house.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2008/06/23 - Updated: 2008/06/24 - 2035 words

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  • You Stole My Breath

    (#) medicatedlives 2008-06-24 12:06:35 AM

    But, but... -points to Jon- She couln't have just left him there! The poor fellow. I hope they meet again. =( And Ethan pisses me off. Just saying. I'm looking forward to the next update!

    Author's response

    It wouldn't be much of a Jon story if they didn't meet again. So don't fear.

    You may have to settle for Brendon in the next chapter or two though, for you know, dramatic effect or elapsed time, or something of that sort.

    You won't have to wait long though. I'm just about to start writing chapter four.
  • You Stole My Breath

    (#) Life_is_42 2008-06-24 12:13:37 AM

    i LOVE a good jon story! but its good that there will be a lovely awkward reunion somehow through reggie and bden! squeee! i can't wait lol.
    waves a huge jwalk sign

    Author's response

    I love your sign!

    It looks like you're a step ahead of me though. There is definitely a reunion of sorts in the works. I hope I still have some surprises in store for you.

    Thanks for reading
  • You Stole My Breath

    (#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-24 09:26:45 AM

    Ohkay...

    Well, after reading this chapter, I'm not sure I can deliver an EQUALLY amazing review.

    But, I CAN say that I love your characters. They seem so realistic. :]

    Especially the little sister. She's kind of bratty, but whatever. I somehow enjoy those characters. They are rather... Entertaining. :]

    Eh, I don't know. I'm just weird like that.

    And attractive police officers who flirts with girls who were supposedly missing are always fun. I like him. He's neat. :]


    Welllllll....

    Since I left a REALLY lousy review, I'm just gonna give you a compliment.

    Your third chapter was AWESOME.

    There you go. :]

    Update soon?
    Yes? Yes.

    Good.


    :]




    Author's response

    I like them too. Well not so much Sabrina, but you know, who likes sisters all the time? She won't always be a bitch, mostly she will, but not always. As for that police officer, he may or may not make a cameo in future chapters (and by that I mean he will but I'm not quite sure how yet). He'll need a name before that can happen though. Maybe Mason. Maybe not. haha.

    As for an update, I'm going to start writing the next chapter as soon as I finish writing this. I have some ideas, but it probably won't be that exciting because it's quite the filler chapter, but who knows, maybe i'll stumble across something that will make it awesome. I'm not promising anything though. : )
  • You Stole My Breath

    (#) chocolatechortle22 2009-04-12 06:18:43 PM

    so this is kinda belated but watever so i wood have totally stayed with jon, i mean come one HES JON FRICKIN' WALKER!

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