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Ungraspable Love
(#) OkieDokie63 2008-06-27
This is a typical story about boy wants girl, girl likes someone else, boy finally gets girl. It’s not an original story, but I sense that it is a true story, which makes me feel for the protagonist.
Watch your punctuation, remember to use paragraph breaks, and use more dialogue.Ungraspable Love
(#) OkieDokie63 2008-06-27
This is a typical story about boy wants girl, girl likes someone else, boy finally gets girl. It’s not an original story, but I sense that it is a true story, which makes me feel for the protagonist.
Watch your punctuation, remember to use paragraph breaks, and use more dialogue.
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