(#) puddangclaner 2008-06-26heyy
love the story, but the thing is, instead of saw,you keep using seen. It is the flaw in a great story!!can't wait for me
(sorry for the writing major outburst)
Author's responselolz i didnt even realize that! ha! well thanks for the review and I'm SUPER glad that you like my story!
Sign up to review this story.