Claire Hurley has never liked her brother (three guesses as to he is) and now she's on tour with the band so she can "patch things up."
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-28 12:12:14 PMFirst of all, I'd just like to say that I absolutely love the title of this fic. It surely captured my attention as well as your writing. :]
I must say, I really do like your characters. They seem really realistic. They aren't Mary-Sues, especially Claire.
She's different from most characters I've read that go on tour with Fall Out Boy. She's a little arrogant, and highly opposed to Andy. When most characters I've read that go on tour with FOB, they are shy, insecure girls that get along with everybody.
But not Claire. She's spunky and can be a bitch, is necessary. She's not afraid to be herself and doesn't have a doubt in her mind that she is beautiful.
Alas, you've brought something new to the table. :]
I like the start and I can't wait to read more. :]
my heart... it's melting! ahaha, thank you, dumpling! i must say, before i got up the nerve to join ficwad and make something, i read one of your stories (the one with saffy, forgive me for forgetting the name- i'm never good with those) and i loved it! you're a fantastic writer and it makes me feel mushy inside to get such wondermus feedback