(#) ThreeCheersForMCR_x 2008-07-03What a cliffhanger!
Really, I am dying to know who that figure is at the end of the bed...and whose bed?
It would be pretty awesome if it was Quinn...;)
Anyways, the chapter was extremely good and kinda realistic. Like, it's easy to imagine that that was how it could have been when he fell out with his dad. Which it probably wasn't but it's believable. I like how you make your stories fit in with how their life is/was.
Also, I swear the other day I was going insane. I was just reading reviews from fics and I read your review for the last chapter you did for this story and there was one from this guy called 'Robbie'. For a split second, I thought that there was a miniscule possibility that it was Bert...y'know, how Robbie can be short for Robert, he thought that the whole Quinn/Bert thing was weird and he said he couldn't always review...and then I was like, What the hell was I thinking?!?. I think I am becoming a little too obsessed with Bert. :/
Jeez, sorry for the long-ass review! Hope you don't think I'm too deranged. ^^
Author's responseOhmygosh, you know what? I was thinking the exact thing. But I was like, "I am so fucked up." because I mean, come on...why would Bert McCracken read this crap.
and the Robbie dude has my Gerard way story on favorites, and I dunno...it seems unlikely.
But I have this weird hope.
- Oh shit. I can't wait to find out who the dark figure is. Such a great ending. I really love this story-it's way too awesome. I know I've mentioned it before but I love the way you write and manage to describe things. It's killing me thinking who the dark figure might be. It could be Quinn but I somehow doubt it. It could be his dad come back for him but I doubt that even more, (his dad's a cunt for not loving Bert.)
I hope it's not someone who's going to hurt him in any way. I think you'll make the next chapter great anyway.
Loving the story. Update soon.
(#) LoveAndDeath 2008-07-05Wow...um... wow. That was a really good chapter. really intense, man.
I kept thinking of the Bird and the Worm cause you kept mentioning hiss backpack.
And I'm sure Bert wouldn't think this was crap if he read it.
-Robbie (but not McCracken...sorry)
Author's responseMerci beaucoup and you don't have to apologize for not being Bert!
And yeah...Bird and the Worm references...the next chapter's has a Maybe Memories reference (but not the song)
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