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Coming Home

finding ones home and asking question about it.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2008/07/07 - Updated: 2008/07/08 - 3924 words

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• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) Cateagle 2008-07-07 09:55:20 PM

  Well, the STeam worldline sounds like an interesting one, though I'm not sure whether or not the failure to develop other power technologies is a good or bad thing. Meanwhile, it sounds like Harry on the home line is getting ready to go to war in every way possible; you can almost hear Heather Alexander's "March of Cambreath" quietly playing in the background as he does so. I suspect Tommy-boy and his lackeys are going to be rather unpleasantly awakened to the sentiments of those lyrics (q.v.). ::chuckle:: I just googled "March of Cambreath" and found that someone did "The Order Fight Song" as a filk to the "March"; wicked!!
  
  On the down side, there were enough spelling and word choice problesm ti annoy my "beta" side but it's still an enjoyable read.

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) pnakasone 2008-07-08 05:21:11 PM

  I hope to see a more detailed background history of the steam world as well as a discussion of the factions in that world. What is the status of other nations in the world? How did Briton keep its empire in that world?
  

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) biged78 2008-07-09 07:45:46 AM

  This is a very interesting story. I eagerly await your next update.

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) Rocky235 2008-07-29 11:15:27 AM

  "He did not plan on taking prisoners."
  
  Anytime Harry says something like that a good story follows.

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) AnnF 2008-08-26 11:51:16 PM

  Please get a beta.
  
  Also, why isn't Harry mad that his family's employees never made themselves known to him?

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) cobweb1 2008-08-30 09:25:56 AM

  I echo AnnF: Please get a beta.
  
  This is an interesting story and deserves to be tweaked so it is easier to read.
  
  I do think that Harry deserves a better explanation as to why he was never contacted by a retainer or the goblins pertaining to his family and history.
  
  Cobweb

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2009-02-10 01:55:46 PM

  Outstanding chapter. I love how this story is going. As for the mistakes, I can live with them. If I was paying to read it then I would expect perfection.
  
  gunny

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