(#) crystalcrash 2008-07-14Hmmm... not too much to say about this for now except... interesting. It's pretty weird and even more so since i don't remember seeing that episode of Buffy you refer too, but this seems like it'll develop into a pretty interesting story. Especially if you're the one that's writing it ;)
Keep it up... but don't forget about Soul Purpose!! I want to read it until the end! hehe ;)
Author's responseYay, interesting! Thanks!! I strongly recommend you watch that episode but its a 6th season episode, you'd probably wouldn't enjoy it very much if you don't know the season. That episode plays with your mind, seriously ;)
Thankies again. And of course I won't forget about Soul Purpose. Would I do something like that, now?
(#) PartyPoisen 2013-08-07Can you please answer my question from almost twos years ago? It is bugging the crap out of me not knowing the answer. This is the greatest story I have ever readon in my 7 years of reading stories of all genres. Please finish darn it. XO
Author's responseHey, it's been ages since I've last been here. Do you mean this question below?
"His torso arches back from the bed as the two men approach him and he flails his restrained limbs, struggles more violently.
How does his torso arch back from the bed? Is he on his stomche? If he is on his back how does his stomache arch off the bed?"
If so, I should clarify that he's on his back. His back arches as he's lying on the bed, I guess I didn't use a good enough phrase to clarify that.
You know what, I have had this story all planned out in my head for years now. I just didn't have the time, and then the motivation to finish it. I still come back to it from time to time, I actually wrote a big part of the next chapter (probably lost it by now).
I don't know, I might finish this one some day soon, because I really liked writing it.
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