Envy wants what he can't have. But having Ed will do.
(#) DB 2005-12-26 05:02:20 PMI'd be lying if I didn't say it was creepy. And I'd be lying if I didn't say I loved it for it.
Normally, slash is not my thing, but I loved how it was played here, because it quite simply works. Envy's possessive, vengeful taking of Ed, Ed's lost, confused resignation to it. It's completely in character and wondefully written. Nice work.
Author\'s Response: Oooh, I love getting good reviews of my slash from people who aren't slash fans. It lets me know I'm actually doing well story-wise. I don't know if you'll ever read this response, anonymous DB person, but thank you. ^_^