- Nice. I like the way that Harri and Harry decided to deal with the Malfoys. I can't wait to see the results, they should be fun to watch if not to experience. I do have one small nitpick though and that is that you sometimes slip up with the gender pronouns. An example is near the end of the scene between the Dark Lady Riddle and Lucile Malfoy, Dumbledore is referred to as a he. Otherwise this is a great and interesting story which I enjoy reading very much. Actually I've enjoyed it so much that I've re-read it many times. So thank you and keep up the good work please.
- I think the only thing i would hav added to this chemistory was to allow Hermione to also crossover, and make her stake on Harry and maybe Luna too!
Imagine the way Orestes and Hermione would have worked otgether and with Luna!
Just imagine the...possibilites!
- ::chuckle:; It's going to be interesting to see the reaction to Harry's threatening Thubani; esp. since he did such a stone cold number at it. When Lucille finds out, I daresay she's going to try and take Harry out and be very, very unplesantly suprirsed, even given what she knows about what happened to Strews. Thomasina, Lucille, et al. who weren't there are all assuming that Harry got her from ambush; I wonder what their reactions would be if they knew the truth about the straight-up duel? Methinks Thomasina ahd her minions are going to be in for some very, very rude and nasty surprises.
Meanwhile, I rather enjoy the way things are developing 'tween Luna and Harry and the steps Luna takes to get Erin to back off.
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-08-01Very good work with this update, though there were a couple of gender slips. In addition to the one mentioned by Bookfiend, Harri is also referred to as a "he" at one point.
Pity you didn't decide to call it the Wiccengamot...just sounds better to my addled mind.
Looking forward to more.
- I think that it would have been very interesting for Harry to go back to MaleVerse, only to find that the Luna's had switched with him. Be funny to find a Luxo Lovegood in MaleVerse, and Luna was just trying to seduce Harry... Just a thought.
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