Bob finds out Ali's secret.
- No Bob! Get Mark away from Maddie! He can't split them up.
That was so exciting.
I hate misunderstandings like that.
GREAT chapter, update soon.
Author's responseHi Alice,
Will Bob get Maddie back? One more chapter then the epoilogue.
Thanks for thinking it was exciting!
Did you think for a moment that Bob and Ali just might get back together?
If Madison waited five more seconds she would have known how Bob really felt.
Thanks again for the compliment I'm going to try as soon as I can it's going to be a very long chapter.
(#) Dondon1827 2008-08-04 09:11:14 AMOmg heart racing chapter
that always happens, they never see how they really feel
I hope bob and maddie are still ok
A very emotional talk is in order me thinks
update soooooon :)
Author's responseHi Dondon,
That's what I was hoping for!!
It's true it's cliche but necessary.
We'll find out next chapter won't we. I can't give out secrets.
Hopefully they will have a talk and straighten it all out.
It will be a long chapter so it might take me a while to update.
(#) cutegirl12356 2008-08-04 10:24:32 AMHOLY CRAP.....OMFG....I love this fucking story sooooooooooo much....MORE....I love it!
Author's responseHi there cutegirl,
Thank you so much!! I'm glad you love it!!! I'll try to update as soon as possible.
Get it all out!! Now breathe.
Mark an asshole? Wait, maybe I'll turn him nice just like everyone else that started off mean.
I'll post as soon as I'm done.
(#) 30STMislove 2008-08-04 12:19:19 PMWTF?! That stupid sadistic fucking..........
anyway... more please???
i promise i won't rant.
plus Maddie CAN'T be with Mark!! He's an asshole!!!!! and has a huge stick stuck up his ass.
Author's responseHi there,
I hope you're talking about Mark or Ali and not Bob.
It's going to be a long chapter with lots of things happening so please be patient.
We'll just have to wait to see what happens with Mark, Ali, Bob and Madison.
(#) ThnksbutiloveBobmore 2008-08-08 09:34:34 AMI am SO sorry for not reviewing, i was in france with no internet. Nearly drove me crazy. Forgive me. xD
Stupid Bob, he's such a twat. Why did he kiss her twice. Fool!
Update Soon Please.
Author's responseHi Eloise,
First of all WELCOME BACK!!!! I hope you had a good time. I kind of figured you were on holiday or something like that. So no reason to apologize.
Now to the story.
For a minute there he was confused and caught in the moment. But we'll see how it all works out.
I have something that could be an update ready but debating whether to add more to it or not.