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" Regardless, I'd Love You Always..... ".

by Harrow 5 Reviews

And he's 13 and she's 17 but yet theres still love there.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Romance - Characters: Gerard Way - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2008/08/09 - Updated: 2008/08/10 - 1333 words

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  • " Regardless, I'd Love You Always..... ".

    (#) dtng101 2008-08-09 09:38:00 PM

    OOOHHH can't wait for more please update soon
    ~D.
  • " Regardless, I'd Love You Always..... ".

    (#) xCherryRossx 2008-08-09 11:26:03 PM

    Great start
    I can't wait for the rest.
    Update soon?
    -Cherry
  • " Regardless, I'd Love You Always..... ".

    (#) LoveFAI 2008-08-10 08:06:10 AM

    Hey, I'm here, with my promised review. Okay, I liked your writing style, and you wrote it pretty well, but just a couple o' technical things that might make your writing better. I noted that you didn't really put in periods at the end of your sentences, so it was like one huge run-on. You might wanna fix that. Also, you didn't capitalize the sentences (when the people were talking) and again, there was no punctuation mark at the end. Another thing about dialogue, you should put in a new line break whenever someone is talking. Because it's really hard to read otherwise.

    If you need me to beta your chapters or something, you can email me at graveyardxshift@wild4music.com

    Anyway, great start. Keep writing.
  • " Regardless, I'd Love You Always..... ".

    (#) Ibuildthecoffins 2008-08-10 05:09:17 PM

    Loved the beginning.
    Kind of agreed with love FAI, it was a bit hard to read because of a lack of punctuation, no offense.

    More soon???


    XXXX
    Anna
  • " Regardless, I'd Love You Always..... ".

    (#) TheChemicalRose 2008-08-13 09:27:55 AM

    a little more punctuation .Thats all i gotta say.Ur story rocks other wise.very desciptive.

    Addie

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