At the hospital.
(#) mcr_rox_42495 2008-08-29 02:02:43 AMWhat does Frank mean??? He can't leave! :( I love angst, but I really hoped for a happy ending for this story!!! It's so sad that Gee can't sing anymore... :P
You are the best author ever! I could feel the emotions clearly in this chapter, and it was really sad... :(
I hope you update soon, I can't wait to find out more!!! :D
- Hi there,
I love the ending and the guilt he must feel is incredible. First for not telling them and then not going straight to the police like Bob wanted to.
I totally get why he feels he doesn't deserve them as friends but in the end he's doing it again, abandoning them when they need him the most.
Again I loved it and can't wait to read more.
- Gerard's lung is damaged, Ray's brain was damaged (the afro should have shielded the bullet away), and Bob's leg was hurt.
Why so harsh?
But yet...I still loved it?
I guess there's just something with the way you write it.
(#) RippedIntoPieces 2008-08-30 02:32:14 AMJeez, you know how to make sad endings. Gerard's gonna feel like crap when he finds out about his lung.
And Frank??? I can understand why he may feel the need to leave, obviously he's convinced that he caused the whole "Jess is a maniac" thing. But you have to have him leave a note or something, they can't just fall apart, they're friends!
You seriously rock at writing, and I am ultimately jealous.
Waiting for the update grudgingly...