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dr who ghostship prt 1

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a new era for the doctor

Category: Doctor Who - Rating: G - Genres: Sci-fi - Characters:  - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2008/08/30 - Updated: 2008/08/30 - 3113 words - Complete

int: dinning room screen one

The dinning room has a table set in the middle of the floor with chairs with a small space in between. A crew sits around it laughing and talking the captain siting at the top of the table stands up. And clinks his glass the crew turn round to notice they all become quite and the captain speaks.

Captain ashen

My fellow crew first mate Sanna

Sanna walks up beside him they look at each other and smiles

CAPTIAN ASHEN

thank you all for joining us on this voyage you're company has meant a great deal to me and to Sanna. And in return we hope you enjoy you're time here no need for cheer. Just relax and fill you're self up

Sanna

we hope our serverses will of use to you. So sit back and relax

captain

now with out hisataion lets dig in and may this voyage become peacefully

they all raise their glasses and cheer Sanna stares at ashen coldly.

INT.tardis control room

The tardis doors open a man who's dying his glowing his body having a dark blue glow is in pain. He clutches his tummy this is the doctor and he,s about to end his 10th life. He

reaches for the control he collapsed on it sending the tarids to shake the doctor falls to the floor. Landing on his side the tarids stops couple of minutes the regeneration

stops the doctor sits up in a hurry he curls in to his knees he looks round he ,s confused. He picks himself up slowly he leans against the tardis controls again. He rubs his

forehead he stands back in shock he looks at his hands turning them back and forth. He touches his hair he finds it more shorter he takes a mirror out of the drawer.In the tardis he takes a deep breath then looks in it

DOCTOR

Ahhhhhh, well its much better than my last body. I like the brown eyes the hair could have been better .

The doctor puts the mirror down and look,s over his outfit

DOCTOR

oh dear god no this wont do i don't mind the brown long coat.But the blue suit what the hell was i thinking need a change now.

The doctor walks over to a closet in the tardis hall and walks inside.

int. tardis wadrope

The doctor stands in front of row after row of outfits all different. We can see as he passes each outfit ninths 1st

and 3rds outfits as well as a Sherlock Holmes outfit he picks it out and modal,s it front of a long mirror he shakes his .

DOCTOR

Erm no not my thing

he wear,s trough 3 more outfits before sporting something in the back. He reaches in and pulls it out its a dark brown suit. Brown trousers brown top with a garliffryn logo on it and a brown jacket. He puts it on and looks in the mirror he

parades in front of it turning round for a back view he smiles approvingly. He looks round the other half of the wardrobe he spots a 5o,s style hat.Same colour as the outfit he puts it on and looks in the mirror. He then walks out back to the tardis control room closing the door behind him.

INT.TARDIS CONTROL ROOM

the doctor goes over to the controls he study,s the computer,screen. His face filled with disbelif

DOCTOR

no it can,t be can it ?

the doctor walks to the door and begins to open it

DOCTOR

lets see whats it like

EXT.boatdeck

The tardis doors swing open the doctor steps out he looks round. He stares aprovingly as he walks on he hears footsteps. He hides behind two boxes thats lying by he looks on from behind .As he watches Sanna and the captain agruing


CAPTIAN ASHEN

Look Sanna dont agrue with me ok, we need you on look out.


SANNA

Look this is really really degrading ive been by...

CAPTIAN ASHEN

You,re side for 3 years now i heard this befor., NOW STAND HERE AND LOOK OUT OK

sana and ashen salute each other ashen then leaves her alone

sana looks over board watching the seas the doctor looks at her,. Sanna turns round she sees nothing shurgs her soulders then turns back to the water.The wind going trough her hair

Sanna turns once again she spots a bit of the doctors jacket she walks over to the boxes. She brings out a gun and points it to the doctor the doctor stands up he looks at the gun


DOCTOR

Hi iam the doctor nice to meet you and you are

SANNA

Sanna, nice to meet you now tell me how you got here or ill shoot

DOCTOR

how i got here well erm, i got lost .

Sanna looks at him with a yea right look in her eyes the doctor nods back she puts her gun away .

SANNA

Dosent matter really you,re still a stoway but i wont tell anyone

doctor

thank you, tell me whats youre job ?

sana

iam firstmate why you ask ?

DOCTOR

becasue firstmate Sanna i want to stay here .

SANNA

You cant not here !

DOCTOR

why not ?

SANA

you,ll end up dead

DOCTOR

you,re kidding right well no supprise there

SANNA

come on ill give you a tour of the Discovery

DOCTOR

did you say Discovery

SANNA

yes i did why something wrong

DOCTOR

er,er no nothing wrong

they walk off Sanna gives him a guide of the ship wich takes them to the war room. The doctor puts his hands in his pockets

thy walk in to a fade out to next screen

int.war room

the war room is padded with medals and weapons all laid out on the wall. Theres battle plans in a cage in the far

conner it says plans for war 1932. Two men is sitting in a desk one man on each side. There passing information back and forth

GRILLER

so you think this will work?

you know how i feel about this kind of planning

ashen

i understand completely but this will make it simple ....

The door opens footsteps can be heard voices can be heard ashen hides the paper under the desk. When there in veiw of the Doctor and Sanna. The captain and griller stand up and salute., Sanna dose the same, griller and ashen sit back ashen seem anoyed

he looks at Sanna then the doctor he gestures towards him ,

ASHEN

who the hell is this?. And how he get on board is he one of them, .

The doctor bows then steps forward towards a weapons display case

DOCTOR

you collect weapons captain i,am not very fussed to be honest. They always give me chills you know" because they weapon like stuff thats very dangerous


the doctor notices a case its wooden with a spiral design on it. The doctor examines it as the other 3 look on, Sanna stands still but griller glances at the doctor. He gets up and walks towards him he then looks at what the doctor looks at

GRILLER


I say young man the captain ask you for you,re name reply him

DOCTOR

Nice case very French 1932 and judging by this ship, i,d say 1934 so this was 2 years old

GRILLER

yes that, what the hells youre name


DOCTOR


Oh sorry i,am the doctor ,


(he picks himself away from the case. and leads griller away too back to ashen and Sanna )

so this is the Discovery is it i must say compared to what it is now. It,s gorgeous by the way thats 2007 not this year , you ok sanna

Sanna look,s a bit pale the doctor looks at her


SANNA

yes i,am fine, we need to get going its time

DOCTOR

time time for what, what you talking about ?

Screams can be heard from up stairs they all rush where the screams is being heard

EXT.BOATDECK night

they see a man struggling with his hand he attempts to strangle him self, he grips his throat. The doctor runs over he tries to get near,. But he jumps back he looks at the crowd

ASHEN

you can,t do anything for him

DOCTOR

why, why not hes ...

ASHEN

dead i know doctor

they look on as the man strangles himself blood drips from his mouth. Little crack sounds echos trough he slowly closes his eyes. His hands fall by his side he stands still

the doctor move slowly, towards him. He taps the man lightly on the chest nothing happens then all of a sudden his neck falls to the side,Then the corpse falls down in a crumpled heap the doctor examines the body .

DOCTOR

I,am sorry hes dead

He looks round again not a sound come from anyone hes looks in shock,. ashen looks at his crew he waves at them then points at the corpse. The doctor watches in amazement as four of the crew pick up the corpse and carry it away.

ASHEN

Now thats taken care off , griller permission to carry on. that conversation

griller nods they both walk off leaving the doctor and Sanna alone .

SANNA


I suppose you want me explain that

DOCTOR


no no no, god just because a guy breaks his own neck, right in front of me you assume i need a explanation .

SANNA

You want me to explain it don,t you ?

DOCTOR

that would be great thank you

Sanna wanders round with her arms out widespread she embraces the night air, as if it was normal to her

SANNA


you ever heard the expression you,re better off dead doctor ?

the doctor nods he walks over to her Sanna stops him ,the doctor stops

SANNA


It was nice you know!, being on this ship everything was perfect my first day. I did,nt know what was going on. Ashen took me under his wing showed me the ropes .


DOCTOR

are you two family

SANNA


no but i wish i was he,s amazing

Sanna sits next to the doctor she puts her head to hands the doctor secures her

DOCTOR

whos the other guy ?

SANNA

Griller hes the head of this ship ashen. Report to him at all times , we picked up these, group of people. Ashen said griller ,aproved it . they ended up dead ashen killed them

DOCTOR

dead as in dead ?

Sanna gets up brushshes herself off and takes the doctor with her she leads him to a dark part of the boat



int.celler dooor

Theres a door with a lock ,the lock is gold with a skull and cross bones attach to it,. Sanna stops,.The doctor stops at the same time Sanna turns round.

SANNA

Behind this door is where we kept them .

Sanna opens the door they both walk in they look round nothings there Sanna. Serches round but nothing turns up the doctor watches her, then puts his hands on her to stop her from freaking out .

DOCTOR

Calm down calm down Sanna what you looking for?

SANNA

(she stops then moves in close to the doctor)


The bodys there were here i could have sworn thats were there kept

DOCTOR

let me get this right you keep the dead in this room ?

Sanna leans against the wall she paniks the doctor looks on

DOCTOR

why....?

SANNA

the corpses are normally kept in here it was ashen idea, so no one will find out but our own crew started to die

DOCTOR

like the crew mate just there

Sanna nods then carrys on

SANNA


he felt it was the best way to keep everything thing hush hush so it wont rise panick

DOCTOR

but everybody saw it ?

by this time they were locking the door they walked back up the stairs there greeted by ashen

ASHEN

we,re wanted in the war room Sanna doctor you,re wanted too

both the doctor and Sanna salute then make their way to the war room Sanna pulls the doctor back .

SANNA

please dont say a word

DOCTOR

i promise Sanna ok "

they both smile at each other, they go on they get to the war room they walk inside. Sanna falls to her knees
the doctor picks her up they both look at ashen .

They look round at the floor they find griller on the floor he lies there with blood, covering his torso ashen stands by his side.

SANNA

Oh my god what did you do him

They both burst out laughing griller gets up and drys the blood out he slaps ashen on the back, Sanna is frurious
the doctor watches it all he then notices, a light glow behind ashen then it vanishes. He shakes it off he then focuses on Sanna who more or less attacks ashen and griller thumping there chest the doctor pulls her back .

SANNA

you bastard i thought he was dead i thought something happend to him

ASHEN

calm down it was just a plan i came up with for future atacks, i figure if we all pretend we,re dead then our enemes wont attack

DOCTOR

you,re enemys ashen who are they

GRILLER

the ghosts doctor the same basterds who killed poor Cancid .

DOCTOR

So thats his name so these ghost youve been at war with them for how long ?

ASHEN

since we began this journey

the doctor and Sanna look at each other


DOCTOR

since you began so a bunch of ghost decided oh look theres a nice boat.Lets start a war with it for no good reason

GRILLER

yup that sums it up

the doctor raises an eyebrow to them

DOCTOR

oh,ok listen iam just going back up stairs and laugh about something ok.

the doctor leaves Sanna bows and leaves too ashen and griller carry on talking .

boatdeack night

the doctor is outside he burst out laughing sanna finds him she walks towards him and helps him up. At this time a ghost appears in front of them the doctor collects himself

he salutes the ghost the ghost look in disgust

ghost

please dont do that makes me sick

DOCTOR

i am sorry why are you here? who are you ?

GHOST

my name is fallen i was one of the passengers here. When Sanna worked here iam here as a warning

SANNA

warning! about what ?

fallen

not what who

DOCTOR

you mean ashen?

Sanna turns round to the doctor she begins to speak but the doctor cuts her off before she can begin

DOCTOR

whats wrong with ashen?

fallen screams as her body begins to glow,. the doctor tries to stop her fallen vanishes Sanna turns the doctor round .

Sanna

What,s ashen got do with this

DOCTOR

iam not sure but theres something about him i dont trust

the doctor walks off back to the basement Sanna follows

DOCTOR

i want to go back to the war room

SANNA

why? theres nothing down there

DOCTOR

don,t let youre eyes play tricks on you Sanna. c,mon we haven,t got much time besides i want to talk to griller.

they both look up the glow shines from the top roof then vanishes. they both head back to the war room

ASHEN

correct doctor

he then vanishes leaving a dust behind .

INT.WAR ROOM

The doctor rushes in and starts looking trough all the shelves, he picks out the books one by one he reads them lightning fast then moves on to the next shelf. Sanna comes in she looks on at the floor she sees all the books she notices the doctor is still reading ,. she picks up the books the doctor stops, he has a book in his hand he reads 3 pages then taps the next page he places it on the table


he flicks trough the pages Sanna looks over his arm

DOCTOR

well well look at this ashen been captain for over 30 years

SANNA

yes so what? hes been on good behaviour

DOCTOR

but why? i mean if there was a mass murder here, surely someone would have called the police ?

SANNA

all the phone went out doctor no one can be reached

DOCTOR

who told you this ?

SANNA

ashen doctor

DOCTOR

wheres griller? i want to have that talk with him

Sanna walks over to the curtains she opens them to find griller splaterd across the window. His body in a bloody mess she screams the doctor pulls her back !

DOCTOR

i dont think we can trust anyone here i,am not convinced that was an accident

ashen appears at the door hes holding a whistle he walks forward clutching it in his hand. he claps very slowly then stops he stands on a 2nd step the doctor hides Sanna from him ,ashen laughs his cackle echos across the room

ASHEN

oh you are smart doctor its a shame you have to die, oh well nice meeting you

he gose to blow but the doctor cuts him off

DOCTOR

why you doing this ashen? your in charge of this ship

ASHEN

oh ill tell you soon enough doctor if you survive that is? and trust me i hope you don,t

SANNA


Are you going to kill me too ashen, i don,t know what the hells going on but ill find out trust me

ashen laughs again he floats toward Sanna. Sanna shakes with fear ashens body his eyes glowing red. He grips sanna,s chin and kisses her on the cheek he then turns to the doctor and winks at him ashen steps back up

ASHEN

Oh my dear iam not going to kill you oh, no, no, no, no, they are

He blows the whistle loud howling noices can be heard ghost,s start to apear from the floor. Ashen laughs some more as the ghost,s line up ashen stops laughing the doctor and Sanna move back in fear. As the ghost move forwards the ghost faces melt their eyes gushing with ozze. The doctor and Sanna turn to the left they get stopped by more of them ashen begins laughhing again .

ASHEN

very hungry ghost,s and look a two course meal.

Ashen laughs one more time then vanishes . Leaving the doctor and Sanna behind the ghosts. start a repeated come with us chant the doctor and Sanna move back, untill they reach a dead end. The ghost come in closer and closer chanting the same thing come with us come with us

end of part one end credits


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