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ghostship prt 2

by mitchalexnoble 0 Reviews

will the doctor and sanna escape the ghost and why is ashen acting so strange

Category: Doctor Who - Rating: G - Genres: Sci-fi - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] [?] - Published: 2008/08/30 - Updated: 2008/08/30 - 3403 words - Complete

INT.war room

the ghosts close in tighter and tighter they begin to touch them feeling their skin sanna cringe as the slimy hands move all over the doctor notices the space behind the table he gestures sanna towards it sanna shakes her head frozen stiff the doctor takes her hand and pushes her to the side she climbs the desk over the side the doctor rummages in his pockets he looks up at the ghost he points the far door

doctor

GO TO YOU'RE ROOM NOW

the ghosts turn round they make their way to the door the doctor and sanna sigh in releif the ghosts stop they turn round and head back up

sanna

nice one doctor what the hell was that

the doctor rumuges in pocket again he panics as the ghost get closer and closer again

DOCTOR

it worked befor god where did i put it i hope i have ahh here it is

SANNA

have what doctor please there comming in fast

the doctor pulls out the sonic screwdriver he points at the ghosts sanna looks on at the sight of the doctor posing with it the ghosts take no notice

DOCTOR

if i were you id cover you're ears sanna

she covers her ears the doctor grips the sonic screw driver and preses the button a large siren emits from it its sound causing the walls to shake the weapons cage develops a crack down the middle the ghosts all scream as the dissaper when there out of sight the doctor and sanna collapse on the ground the doctor puts the driver in his pocket

SANNA

whats was that

DOCTOR

a sonic screw driver sanna i always carry it about

SANNA

we better find ashen what happened to him anyway

DOCTOR

i donut know but iam wanting to find out

they head upstairs they head to the deck the doctor stops sanna is still down there the doctor stands with his hands in his pockets and walk down

DOCTOR

are you ok sanna

SANNA

no iam not ashen tried to kill me doctor ok we argued but who dosent

DOCTOR

i don't think thats ashen sanna what ever happened to him hes dead

SANNA

oh god

DOCTOR

got nothing to do with him c,mon lets find him shall we

the doctor holds out his hand the doctor smiles sanna clasps on they run together they run trough the deck and into the dinning hall they stop the doctor and sanna notices where they are the doctor notices something on the table he moves caustaly towards it he picks it up and reads it

DOCTOR

last minute pick up at 3:30 ( he checks his watch then go back to reading the note) the pick up is for a group of six people for two days

SANNA

oh thats new never knew about this

DOCTOR

(hes looking round the table feeling the edges he brings out his hand from it and dust them off )

really how come thought you were first mate?

sanna puts down the note she then walks up to the doctor she notices his hands were filthy from the table

SANNA

why were you feeling the table doctor

DOCTOR

iam not sure to be honest i was checking for something c,mon lets get going

SANNA

where to

DOCTOR

weve got a dinner plan

they both rush out closing the door behind them two eyes apear in the wall then n dissaper

ext. port bridge


the drawbridge is down the bridge has a rope on each side with a red carpert going down the middle the bridge extends to the dock thres a crowd waiting to get on ashen is standing at the top he salutes the crowd and then orders the sailor to open the bridge the crowd is made of group of rich types there dreased in black dinnersuits and the females is dreased in fine dreases they walk up in two some of them holding hands some walking side by side

one man walks up to ashen he puts his hand round ashens soulder

mr crayson

thanks for inviting us mr ahsen where griller by the way ive got a little thing for him

ashen notices what he s holding a dimond neackless the light shines in his eyes ashen shuns away

mr grayson


are you ok mr ashen

ashen snaps back in he turns to grayson a smile spreads across his face

ashen

iam fine sir thank you listen why dont we get wi the others shall we ?

grayson

certenly but wheres griller

ASHEN

hesnot very well at the moment sir he vomnited his guts out

GRAYSON

oh dear well i hope he pulls himself together

ASHEN

i doubt that sir shall we get going

Grayson nods they head up to the party they both wave the crowd

waves back Grayson takes ashen to his wife they shake hands

INT.dance hall night

the dance hall is dicoreated with a gold light the chandeller is hangning from the celling the floor laced with a red carpert going down the middle of the floor people start to swan in they begin dancing music plays do the waltz ashen watches from the top of the top of the floor

int. portbridge

the doctor and sanna rush to the port bridge they look round no ones in sight they notice two guards on ether side they standing still keeping an eye for unwanted visorters the doctor and sanna walk up to them when they get up close they salute each other the guards stand to attention

renner

firstmate sanna nice to see you out and the doctor is it

DOCTOR

hi

RENNER

you allright miss you look as if you seen a ghost

they turn there heads then turn them back the doctor steps forward he graps renner by the coller with two hands he lokks at renner angry he shakes him hard he then puts him down sanna then steps forward she has the powerface on

SANNA

whats this about a 3:30 pick up

rennar

it was a last minute decission ashen said he,ll take them tonight

SANNA

why tonight whats so spechal about tonight

DOCTOR

what todays date

RENNAR

24 11 1944 sir why

DOCTOR

no no no no way thats impossiple

SANNA

what you going on about doctor

the doctor rushes back to his tardis sanna follows him she catches up the doctor dosent notice he takes out his keys the doctor opens it up he then turns to sanna

DOCTOR

you got one choice sanna come inside or stay out but be warrnd its nothing youre imagenation can with hold

the doctor rushes inside sanna walks in then screams

int. tardis

the doctor rushes round still sanna trys to take the awsoem sight befor her the awsome room all the machens befor her standing out like a sun upon a diamond she walks round touching the surface of the walls the controll rooms the doctor notices her bewelderment sanna begins to cry

SANNA

what is this doctor

DOCTOR

the latest ship sanna its known as the ss tardis

SANNA

never heard of it are you sure its a new form of boat

DOCTOR

yes firstmate it is

the doctor brings up the data screen he preases in 24 11 44
he checks every single line on the screen he then switches off the screen he then opens the doors again he turns to sanna whos still gobsmacked about the whole thing

they walk out hand in hand she then lest go the doctor stops in his tracks

INT. TARDIS

SANNA

what are you doctor

DOCTOR

what you mean i told iam the doctor

SANNA

yes but no man has ever invented that kind of ship please doctor if iam going to help here i need to know

the doctor resents at fisrt theres a errie scilence then the doctor talks

DOCTOR

iam not from round here sanna

SANNA

oh so youre fohron then

DOCTOR

you could say that iam alien sanna

SANNA

alien ?

DOCTOR

thats right alein iam a time lord

ext.portbridge

by this time they had got to where they met the gurads sanna and the doctor walk pass not noticing the twizzted corpses

SANNA

time lord huh erm so what happend to youre race then

DOCTOR

id rather not get in to that ok wre here

they enter the hall nobody notices them they notice the table its filled with jewls diamonds and septors ashen walking round to the sound of the music the doctor sees him he pulls sanna to the side the doctor watches on as ashen checks his watch he then makes his way to the platform he orders the band to stop the doctor and sanna make there way trough the crowd they get to the middle of the room ashen begins to speak

ASHEN

my good freainds thank you for comming its been a pleasent evening all round do we agree

they all cheer and clap the doctor and sanna look round the doctor gose back to concentrate on ashen ashen scilence the crowd by holding out his hands

ASHEN

but its come to my unfortunet bad timeming that its need to come to an end for you see even trough ive just met you i need you body and soul

sanna looks at the doctor the doctor turns his eyes to her he nods as if knowing what shes going to say

DOCTOR

you ever heard of the bemuda triangle sanna

SANNA

yes its like a gateway isn it

DOCTOR

more than that its a demension for evil spirts years ago i mean centurys befor you were born

SANNA

yes go on doctor

DOCTOR

ill finish that sentence later or better yet see for youre self

he says this just as ashen turns to his ghost form the party all scream some of them try to open the door ashen opens his arms an army of ghosts appear he sends them down the ghost take possesion of the people trying to get out sanna and the doctor looks on as the crowd watch in shock when the escapees explode the smoke from the bodys enter ashens body as if he was inhaling them

ASHEN

ah the sweet tast of human souls boys open the doors let the hunt begin

ext.shipdeck

the doors open all the crowd rush out one by one the ghost catches them slashing troughts breaking neaks the doctor and sanna rush out sanna trys to stay but the doctor pulls her out they get back to the deck where they find spectres all over the place they look round as people have been impaled against the wall people exploding they run by they get to edge of the boat ashen steps in his way he had grayson by the neck the doctor looks at grayson his face coverd in blood his left eyes hangning out ashen takes a step forward the doctor steps back wi kenya in hand

ASHEN

well tell me doctor is this what you were thinking would happen

DOCTOR

actully yes i did the ghost in the war room gave it away what i dont understand is how you got involed

ASHEN

what you mean involed doctor i was always involed the gateway chose me and i accepted

DOCTOR

how long ago

ASHEN

oh about a year befor sanna joind us

SANNA

what you mean all those people we picked up you killed them? why i mean you had everything

DOCTOR

isnt it ovious hes insane sanna the bemuda triangle dose that to people

ashen walks up to the overveiw of the boat he lifts grayson over he watches in horror as sharks come up from the water the doctor and sanna try to interfine as the sharks jump up from its water ashen lifts grayson up from the sharks reach laughping all the time ashen stops the doctor and sanna from comming any closer ashen turns his attenion to grayson

ASHEN

oh my dear grayson how you managed to get on y ship i dont know

GRAYSON

please you invited us on here

(he looks round at all the carnage around him )

i dont want to die no please

ASHEN

but mr grayson isnt this what you wanted to ether get drunk or die trying

grayson look on in shock as ashen lowers him in the shark tears him apart he screams as ashen takes in his soul

the doctor looks on they both run the doctor takes out his sonic screwdriver he sees the roof he and sanna climbs up the ladder ashen watches with intrest the doctor and sanna

reaches the top the doctor looks on as sanna watches in shock the horror of whats happining over whelms her she closes in to the doctor

SANNA

wve got to do something

DOCTOR

we will sanna by the way remember what i was telling you about the triangle

SANNA

yes

DOCTOR

well the bemudatriangle need sprits to exits thats why nobodys seen it

SANNA

you mean ashen dosnt exits

DOCTOR

yup (he preases the buttons on the sonic screwdriver) he may look human but thats the spirts work not him he has no controll over it

the doctor preases the last button sanna covers her ears as the vibrating sound erupts over the ship the ghost scream in agony as they desenergrate leaving the surviving people to sigh for relief ashen looks up to the doctor and sanna

DOCTOR

no dont you dare do it

SANNA

what he going to do

ashen waves his arm in a circler motion the crowd is turnd in to a tonado the guts and skin splatering all over the place arms and legs flying all over the place the tonado stops ashen consumes all the souls the doctor jumps from the roof and faces ashen ashen runs away sanna catches up with the doctor

SANNA

i cant beleave this how can he......

DOCTOR

thats not ashen sanna the ashen you know dose not exist hes not real hes a figment.....

SANNA

i get it get it so how we going to stop hi...oh

they go after him the doctor and sanna head off ot the corpse room they open the door they look for him

SANNA

come out now iam very upset with you ive got a good mind to suspend you peramently

DOCTOR

hes 100 hundrad year old demension sanna i dont think he cares about that

the doctor points to the door sanna looks that way as well she reluctant but agrees she walks up the stairs she gets half way up turns to the doctor she salutes him the doctor dose the same at that moment ashen appears the doctor turns sanna climbs back down the doctor stops her halfway

ASHEN

awww did i interupt youre little moment doctor sanna iam sorry

SANNA

for what (she tries to go down but shes frozen to the spot)

ASHEN

i ever hired you (he holds out his arm he streaches out his hand then closes it sanna gasping for air)

the doctor runs over to ashen as he runs he knocks over a pece of glass thats lying on the table the glass falls on the floor the light from the celling shines on the glass it falls on ashen it burns him he loosens his grip sanna sits down trying to breath the doctor looks over to her she nods to say shes all right he then turns to ashen whos trying to put out the smoke he crumbles to the floor the doctor walks over he picks up the glass he takes it over to him ashen looks on his eyes full of anger he stares at the glass he the gazes in to his eyes the doctor raises it up ashen giggles

ASHEN

you cant do it can you you cant kill me

DOCTOR

how can i kill something thats not breathing how can i kill something that cant touch

ASHEN

ha doctor i could tell you werent the killing type i....

the doctor has the glass over ashens chest ashen grips the doctors hand they fight over it the doctor begins to loose ashen smiles as he prepares to stick the glass in his chest sanna runs over graps the pece of glass and sticks it in ashens chest ashen falls back as they look on ashen starts to fade all his spirts thats hes consumed begins to escape light begins to fill the room ghost appears as ashen gets weaker and weaker they begin to drag him down trough the floor when they do the floor begins to have a dark sticky texture to it the ghost begin to drag him down he screams he struggles to escape the doctor grips sannas hand and they begin to make for the door they get out ashen dissapers in to the ground his arm remaining then sink down

EXT.SHIPDECK

the doctor and sanna runs for the tardis as the boat starts to break up the doctor and sanna try to break torugh it with great difficulty they grip on to the side sanna looses her grip the doctor catches her he brings her to his side

SANNA

thanks doctor by the way what happend to ashen

DOCTOR

he was the gateway to the bemuda triangle if you distroy a door to it the whole place falls apart the ghost dragging him down is his punnishment for failing them

SANNA

you hes stuck down there

docotor

no he wont exits once this ship breaks down wich reminds me

SANNA

yes doctor

DOCTOR

run as fast as we can

the doctor and sanna starts to run again they pass trough all the sticky floor sanna falls down the wind picks her up the doctor stops he holds out her hand sanna trys to grip it but the wind proves too strong the wind carries her to the other side at this moment flashes of rose enter the doctors head as he remembers how he couldnt save rose from the void he gets the doctor shakes it off he heads off to the tardis the doctor opens it whilst sanna is still out there he preases the controlls nothing happens the doctor thumps it

DOCTOR

come on dam it work iam not going to let it happen agin COME ON

the doctor preases the controlls once more the tardis makes the usail sounds the doctor jumps around in joy

DOCTOR

yes wow whooooo ok old girl lets go save her

the tardis lands on the other side of sanna she looks down in amazement the doors open the doctor walks out out but stops at the entrance

DOCTOR

oh so youre just hangning about then eh ok

SANNA

very funny doctor please i dont want to die

DOCTOR

ok i can accept that lol jump

SANNA

what are bloody crazy

DOCTOR

iam serious jump do you trust me

SANNA

yes i do

DOCTOR

then jump

sanna closes her eyes she lets go the doctor catches her and brings her in when she opens them she finds her self in the tardis controll room

INT. TARDIS

the doctor is finding his medicle equipment sanna is still reeling from the shock of it all the doctor walks over and kneels down he takes out a heart reader he looks up at sanna

DOCTOR

would you mind if i put this up to youre chest its just to cheak youre heartbeat

SANNA

ok i trust you

the doctor checks her heartbeat he places it safely on her chest sanna looks on

SANNA

everything ok

DOCTOR

yup everythings fine sanna( he takes it off her then places it down) looks like youll be staying here for a while hope thats ok

SANNA

sure looking forward to it

DOCTOR

great by the way youre in for some dangerous times you prepared for that?

SANNA

after today iam prepared for anything

DOCTOR

ok in case firstmate let me welcome you abord and allow me to show you to youre quaters

SANNA

thank you captain pleasure being aboard and permission granted

they both salute each other then walk out of the controll room the room is empty with no sound other than a double heartbeat wich shows on the heart reader two hearts

the end

next time chillbrains
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