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Eight

by JokeMeKisses 4 Reviews

FACT : When he heard he was going to be a father, he hailed a cab.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2008/08/31 - Updated: 2008/09/01 - 2208 words

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  • You Stole My Breath

    (#) Life_is_42 2008-09-01 02:54:39 PM

    oh my gosh! jon has to be the sweetest person ever. Grin.

    i have to say though, you toyed with my emotions the entire chapter! i was totally on edge going 'wait......wait...what...will reads like a rabid person happn!!' the entire way through XD

    i'm glad they're both being so grown up and matter of fact about this. and i'm SO glad she's going on tour with them!!!!

    dances about

    Author's response

    Being grown up and matter-of-fact seemed like the only way to go about the situation with Cassia and Jon. It was all that seemed to fit their characters. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I know the next one isn't very exciting, but it should get exciting very soon. :)
  • You Stole My Breath

    (#) MrSz-Or3o 2008-09-01 09:04:29 PM

    Have I told you how much i love
    your writing??
    If I havn't then ;; I LOVE YOUR WRITING.
    It's so unique and u always have some kinda theme...like the movie scene in this chapter
    I LOVED IT!!

    Update soon Please =D

    Author's response

    Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
    That really only begins to describe how much your reviews mean to me. Really, I can't say it enough!! Having the chapter themes are the easiest way to know when I'm finished, if I didn't have them I think I would just ramble on forever. haha. Sorry chapter 9 took so long to post.
  • You Stole My Breath

    (#) falloutbaby89 2008-09-02 01:25:27 AM

    If I could kiss Jon right now I totally would! I was scared when I read the summary and thought 'oh crap, he left her' but he didnt and I am so happy. Now they're going on tour together!! Oh my God, Jon Walker is going to be a daddy! I'm so excited! Update soon I beg!! =)

    Author's response

    I was afraid the summary might throw some people off, although at the same time it was kind of what I was going for. I like to throw in some suspense every once in awhile, just to keep things entertaining. Now that I've finished the kind of filler chapter 9, the tour shall begin and drama shall ensue. I'm kind of excited!!
  • You Stole My Breath

    (#) chocolatechortle22 2009-04-26 03:41:43 PM

    yeah i thought he was going to leave her and i was thinking "JON WHAT THE HELL!" but he didnt :) so with the one night stand thing why was that a "special circumstance"

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