14 YO, Naruto's falling to his doom, pushed off a cliff to summon a giant frog *toad.* He meets his prisoner, and Kyuubi teaches him some cool jutsu to kick Neji-Bakas butt, in the chuunin exam. Wh...
Uh, ok the dragon slowed his fall so he hit the bottom but lived, but how did he get out of the "bottomless" crack?
Congrates, you're the only person to notice that flaw, lol! lets just say when he swished away he ran round and went up some stairs cut into the rock, lol!
Not a bad start. Looking forward to see the rest.
Some of the 'life changing revelations' were a bit quick and piled on top of eachother but it's a nice start so far and I kind hope it turns into a harem of some kind. Nice as Naru/hina is, already seems to lean towards the idea the kyuubi play with naruto as well and I always like Teten, ino etc getting naruto to because the men in their life suck.
I thought that was a great start. I also noticed how he was back to the top as I read these reviews. I hope to see a update soon.
Very good start, I enjoyed it. Keep it up, I definetly look forward to new chapters. However I'm confused about one thing. When Kyubi introduced herself she said her name is Kyra, yet when Naruto adressed her he said Kara. Nothing big just a bit confusing.
An interesting beginning. I've always enjoyed stories where Naruto's prisoner is portrayed as a female. (No, not for that reason. ;) ) Hopefully the somewhat lengthy interval doesn't mean this is abandoned. I look forward to more chapters. :)
this is a varry exiting story cant weight for the next chapter
(#) Ppsh 2010-11-23
Very good. It's a shame it's so short, I was quite annoyed when I got to the end & saw T.B.C.
Looking forward to more, I hope you update soon.
pore Hinata she spilled her coco.
very good story, I wish you would update.
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