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• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) riegert8 2006-04-14

  I think this is a good story. I read an lot of story's that potter's always go for red head's. I was surprise that susan was an live at the begining of the story.Good job, keep up the good work.

  Author's response

  Thanks. Chapter 14 is about 75 percent done and will be up next weekend. Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) BlueBlanket 2006-04-23

  Very good opening. Also I have read all of the other chapters and found this alternate Potterverse to not only be very interesting, but also not blatantly sexual and demeaning. Overall, a very very well put together story. Please continue writing.

  Author's response

  Thanks. I'm starting chapter 15 tomorrow. I'll be posting my second story up to chapter 3 tonight. -- Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) The_Resident 2006-04-28

  I heartilly agree with your appraisal of Susan Bones. I have only found 3 other fanfiction stories that pair her with Harry, and all three are incomplete. I am exceedingly happy to find this story of yours. I have only finished the first chapter and am truly enjoying the quality of your writing and applaud the person that is your editor. I didn't find a single spelling/grammar/punctuation error in it. Too many stories are posted without being edited and suffer tremendously for the lack. Once again, great story. I'm really looking forward to the rest of it.

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) The_Resident 2006-04-28

  I like this chapter as well. Harry's a bit more grown up than JKR has him at this point (thank god). I like him providing the alibi for Snape. Still looking good.

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2006-09-28

  Good start. Hate about Amilia, she is one of my favorites.
  
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• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) Dragen 2006-10-19

  What a great start to the story, I can't wait and see Voldemort face when harry appears in fount of him :D I wonder how Harry knew how to make a Portkey??

  Author's response

  Thanks. The whole portkey thing is explained later. ~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) wimvincken 2006-11-19

  Funny and nice story. Is it possible that you spoke with my father? That is what he always said about my friends "pack of hormone driven, depraved, mangy mongrels with delusions of grandeur" (that was then in Dutch, but in the same order). Now more then twenty years later he says the same!

  Author's response

  Glad you enjoyed it. Speaking as someone who was once a teenaged boy and now has a soon to be 5 yr old daughter. It is still true.~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) twistyguru 2010-05-27

  Just finished the first chapter, and found it quite well done. I agree with your characterization of Hufflepuff House, vis a vis how it is seen by the others. I didn't find Voldemort to be out of character at all, and overall am quite impressed by your starting chapter.
  I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story, as you take this rare paring and run with it!

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