i suc summaries but basically there's a new girl and archie is head over heels in love. she's pretty, smart and, best of all, a fighter and is the daughter of one of the goddesses. but there's more...
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well i have to say i like your stories but your chracter is too perfect. shes beautiful, she an outstanding fighter, shes smart, and the daughter of a goddess. pplus she has no personality flaws (i.e paranoid, temper, stubborn.) like a normal human would have. even the gods had flaws! so if your going to make more stories i suggest that you should imperfect your charcters
Author's responseThanks for the response. I'm tried to give her a temper to match Persephones but it didn't work. But, I'm going back through the story and am trying to make it better. Thanks again and could you, if possible, go through it again and find more chances for her to be more hateful towards humanity and the world.
Thanks for the billionth time, really appreciate the feedback.