(#) GhostOfYouMW 2008-10-14This story would be much better, if it wasn't incest. Sorry, don't get me wrong, it could turn out to be a good storyline, but for me, incest is wrong. it might work only if the incest was very distant relatives ie removed cousins, but not brother and sister. Waycest, I can kinda understand, as you can't really make Gerard and Mikey unrelated unless its an AU, but with an original character, it kinda puts me off lol.
Author's responseHey Jake, thanx for the review.
sorry about it, again, it started off as a joke, and just kept it running. lol
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