very true to life ... excellent job!
thanks so much!
it was one of those ideas that just pop into your head and you gotta write it up to get it off your chest y'know?
anyway thanks for the kind review!
(#) neve 2008-10-15
Brilliant summary. So little words but so powerful.
Would make an even better story HINT!!! lol
Aw, thank you :)
I was thinking of making it into a short story. I shall gather m thoughts and see ;D
thank you very much for your review!!
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