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Blood Rite

Spike/Fred. Knox finds a scroll he says has a "cure" for vampirism, using the blood of a souled vampire. But it's entirely possible he has ulterior motives...

Category: Angel - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Angel, Charles Gunn, Fred Burkle, Knox, Spike, Wesley - Published: 2005/05/14 - Updated: 2005/05/14 - 2206 words - Complete

Reviews

• Blood Rite

  (#) Val 2005-10-09 08:02:03 PM

  I liked it. I'm more of an Angel fan than a Spike fan, but this was well written and amusing. Good job.

• Blood Rite

  (#) Ithilwen 2005-12-04 12:24:05 PM

  The description of Rachel turning into a spinywhahoozit could stand to have more emotional detail, but the visual detail is good. Also, I can buy that her attack on Spike happened pretty quickly, but Fred and / or Knox would've had time to do something, like yell (Knox, "I am going to KILL the guys in translation!"), grab something with which to whack Rachel or hit an alarm.
  
  Person Unconscious but Possessed? Yep, that's exactly the sort of thing that happens on Angel. I wouldn't put it past Wolfram and Hart to have covered that in the employee health plan.
  
  I could stand to see more of Fred's speech patterns. Is there anything ginourmous in there?

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