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Chapter 5: The Vacation

by Shadow_Rebirth 1 Reviews

Category: Naruto - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2008/10/30 - Updated: 2008/10/30 - 5941 words


  • Failing Twilight

    (#) mysteriousgod 2008-11-08 10:20:03 PM

    An interesting spin on an old concept. Kishimoto- not even considering his abortion of a plot after the three year skip- does tend to gloss over several details others take for granted.

    I like your story in the way that it takes things more on a 'week-by-week' basis, rather than 'focal points' like: Childhood, Academy, Graduation, Wave, etc.

    Keep your story going strong and steady, don't feel like you need to speed things along to keep interest up.

    Overall, for the story I believe you deserve a strong 4.

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