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There's a dead man in the Dursley's attic. How did he get there? How did he die? And how much is the exterminator going to charge? Warning: No socially redeeming value here. Just fluff. Note:...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG - Genres: Humor - Characters: Peter, Snape, Vernon Dursley, Voldemort - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2006/03/11 - Updated: 2006/03/11 - 1726 words - Complete

Reviews

• 23 GBP

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-03-11 12:43:57 PM

  Amusing. Believable OC and Mr. Dursley is IC.
  
  Grammar etc:
  
  No big problems in here. Certainly nothing that got in the way of the story.
  
  The N in "Number Four, Privet Drive" is usually capitalized.
  
  "purple faced" should be "purple-faced."
  
  "Never mind" is two words. "Altogether" is one word in this case. "Self-appointed" is a hyphenated word.

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  (#) JBern 2006-03-11 02:39:33 PM

  A very humorous effort! Was definitely worth taking my time to read.

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  (#) loralee1 2006-03-22 08:00:13 AM

  hehe liked this a lot. Sort of a fitting end for old wormy

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  (#) DrT 2006-05-06 06:23:40 PM

  Since I read your roommate's piece, I thought I should read this one, too. Well done. Somehow, I just can't feel sorry for Wormtail going after the peanut butter
  
  "T"

  Author's response

  Good scientific approach to fic reading. I approve! grin And yeah, that peanut butter tooth will get you every time...

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  (#) black_spot 2006-05-29 11:31:44 AM

  Nice twist. I like the idea of Voldemort not being able to hear very well. Was Harry aware of the dead body - I would have liked to have seen his re-action.

  Author's response

  Harry was not aware of the body, no. He was away at school. I thought about having him at home, but I kind of wanted to keep this short.

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  (#) saugart 2006-08-28 04:36:34 PM

  I enjoyed the story. Thanks for writing it. It's clever and seems entirely IC for Mr. Dursley. The OC exterminator is entirely believable and I enjoyed having you flesh him out and having you tell the story from his perspective. That made it more believable to me.

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  (#) Trinda 2006-12-16 06:00:40 PM

  Absolutely loved it. Came across it from one of those random stories thing. Very orginal, and I loved it. Seems like a very fitting end for the life of wormtail.
  I'd rate it, but I can't rate it any higer ;)

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  (#) cckeimig 2008-10-03 03:52:56 PM

  Very fun indeed. Too easy a solution, most likely, but nothing less than Peter deserves! Loved it!

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  (#) Clell65619 2009-01-10 07:07:54 AM

  - Very nice. Your story was recommended on the Caer Azkaban newsgroup, so you might get a rash of reviews over the next few days.
  
  - very nice in deed.

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