by Shadow_Rebirth
11 Reviews
Category: Harry Potter -
Rating: PG-13 - Genres: - Characters: -
Published: 2008/11/15 - Updated: 2008/11/16 - 6872 words
Reviews
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(#) lycus 2008-11-15 10:28:43 PM
That was a great chapter, and I loved the scenes with Azrael, Ryan and Harry. And it seems like they make a good team, while the deal with Tom's Horcruxes. I can't wait to see what happens next and I hope that we get another look at how things are going at Hogwarts. Especally since Harry isn't there to keep Malfoy in check.
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Really strong update, aside from Ryan. He still irks me.
Looking forward to more.
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(#) Vanir 2008-11-15 11:28:20 PM
I like.
This team seems to be a good one, even if i see Azrael as highly suspect. Never mind. Bring on the violence, or possibly loads of ice. Inferi on a stick, anyone?
Vanir
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(#) DrT 2008-11-16 01:36:31 AM
Interesting to see if they have the right locket, despite what the diviner said. Good update!
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(#) Thelvyn 2008-11-16 05:12:44 AM
Interesting... I guess in this world RAB didn't get to the locket as I can't see a diviner being mislead in the same way Dumbledore was. I suppose it might be that Slytherin had two lockets and RAB switched them but still...
A good story so far though it does come across as a bit shallow at times I'm afraid - while we don't want to be bogged down in details it seems sometimes things jump out of nowhere, like the unravelling magic bit.
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(#) Innortal 2008-11-16 05:29:51 AM
Good job. I take it this is one of the worlds where Regulus did not switch out the lockets.
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(#) jabarber69 2008-11-16 03:19:59 PM
Hey just get Ryan the werewolf to pee on them! I know that when my male cat pees it stinks to high heaven and can cuts it way thru anything....so that should make the pee of a werewolf highly violatile!
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Lovely chapter! :-)
Ryan is annoyingly hilarious!
Azreal is one of my favorite characters, though curious as to why to keep having Damion comparing him with Harry. Is that meant to hint at something, or completely unintentional?
Hope you update soon, I am enjoying your story very much- thanks for writing it!
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(#) ecorate 2008-11-16 08:01:42 PM
i like i like keep up the good work. o and try to update ur naruto story is a good story and i like it :)
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(#) Wolfric 2008-11-18 08:25:40 AM
Good chapter. Thanks for writing. W.