Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > As Of Yet, Untitled.

Ready Or Not...

by SaveTheDay 6 Reviews

You asked. I answered.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Humor,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Published: 2008/11/20 - Updated: 2008/11/21 - 1165 words - Complete


  • As Of Yet, Untitled.

    (#) canustakemyheart 2008-11-20 10:23:03 PM

    Good job! patiently waits for next chapter

    Author's response

    Thank you! And thanks for being patient :]
  • As Of Yet, Untitled.

    (#) shysmile 2008-11-21 09:25:05 PM

    Fabulous! Excellent chapter as expected.

    My favorite line was, "Or, maybe, bite it off. Or pull it off." Frank and Gerard's conversation was also hilarious.

    I really liked the way you made them seem so real with their thoughts and emotions because, let's face it, this is going to be major for their relationship. I definitely think you did them justice. One thing you have done flawlessly throughout the whole story is keep the characters believable.

    I was also impressed by how quickly you updated. Yay!

    This chapter does have one itsy bitsy point of confusion. I was pretty sure that in an earlier chapter you either wrote in the chapter or in the author's response section that Egan was a virgin. However, you wrote, "Something she said she’d never do again." That clearly says she did have sex at some point. It is very possible I just made the virgin thing up. I just need some clarification.

    Keep it up! I loved it!

    I almost forgot about the STD thingy! I have no idea how I noticed that. Is it sad that it might just be the way my mind functions?

    Author's response

    I noticed a couple mistakes I made too, so I'll go back and fix those after I next update, or maybe now. The first was, as you said, the status of Egan's V-card. I did indeed sau she is a virgin, and when I read your comment and saw that I went "HOLY SHIT!" and my eyes almost came out of my head. And then teh Gerard/Frank conversation, Frank is speaking when it's actually Gerard's turn.

    I love that you are always so positive and uplifting. You're like the moms at kindergarten soccer practice or something.
  • As Of Yet, Untitled.

    (#) izziebella 2008-11-22 08:28:07 PM

    well i just started reading this story and i really love the plot...My fave line was the same as shysmile's, "maybe, bite it off. Or pull it off." lol. I like how even tho gee and egan r togeather, theres still drama in the story...I have one suggestion tho...Maybe if you can, put a flashback in so that the "Something she said she’d never do again." line would make more sence? I think it would work well. But besides that i really love ths story, and i love the fact that its in 3rd person, rather than in gee or egans pov and how the narrator makes some comments here or's a really cool story.
    Please update soon!

    Author's response

    There won't be a flashback, per se, but it will make sense in time. I've got a plan ;] Kinda like God or something, huh?

    I like that line myself. Thank you for the sweet review!
  • As Of Yet, Untitled.

    (#) izziebella 2008-11-22 08:29:01 PM

    ha and sorry for my probably bad grammer/ esl
  • As Of Yet, Untitled.

    (#) gerardluva101 2008-11-26 01:57:51 PM

    I Love the plot and everything about it.

    Can't wait for the smut =] cause i'm just a perv like that.

    But seriously i love it.


  • As Of Yet, Untitled.

    (#) Shadow666Nin 2008-12-02 04:31:19 PM

    this is just amazing, yah?
    I love how everything just flows and it just.. REAL y'knw?
    I feel like you make the characters real people and not just "fiction". I think this could actually happen.
    I really love this.

    Author's response

    Thank you so very much! The best thing for a writer to hear besides "We'd like to publish your work" is "This could really happen". It's such a high compliment. It means, no matter how fantastical you're getting with this, you've also made it believable enough for someone to relate. Thank you again.

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