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She just couldn't make him seem logical.
- This story was good, very good. It had an almost surreal quality about it, which I liked. At times, this was a little hard to follow, but I get the feeling that was done on purpose, and it worked really well.
What was also nice about this was how you managed to insert some humor, how ever dark, into the stolry. It gave it a nice little...I'm sure there's a word for it...touch, maybe? Anyway, there's nothing wrong with a little comic relief.
This was the first story I've read on FicWad...and it was an excellent beginning!
Author's responseThank you for reading and for the well thought out review. ;)
- Wow - I could really feel Cameron's confusion. I don't know how to explain it - Sense of place, maybe - but I could feel the heat, the discomfort, almost claustrophobic atmosphere of the lab. Plus - spot on discription of Chase's manners.
Author's responseThank you. :)
(#) Jelly_Belly 2006-05-04 08:00:08 PMThis was really good. But I don't find Chase that angsty. I mean he is in alot of pain. But he would be more carful not to show it to Cameron. Well writen. ;)
Author's responseApparently, you're not familiar with what "taking liberties" means, which was clearly stated in the beginning of the story. But thanks for taking the time to read it anyway. :)