Alyssa finds out what happened to Bob after she left. We get a look of Emily's home life.
- Oh God, no! No, no, no, no, NO!!!
Bob HAS to get Emily away from that absolute .... ugh! I really don't want to swear in a review.
Poor Emily - she needs to have her faith in men restored by a loving dad, her real dad! Bring on Bob!! He must save her from that pig!
I'm utterly hooked! More soon please
I have new points - and I know how to use them!
Author's responseHi there Sassy,
Yes both of the parents are horrible. On the outside very loving but once they get behind closed doors, poor Emily.
Lets hope the courts will be sympathetic to their cause.
I'm glad you're hooked.
LOL about the points.
Thanks so much for the review!!
- Wow, this was a very deep chapter.
I can understand Gerard being angry but Bob didn't really have a choice. If he had chose just a random name that may have been risky because they might of asked to see this "girl" Bob was with, then he would be stuck if she was a made-up woman.
OMG, they have to get Emily out of there. Child abuse is a very touchy subject but you wrote it very seriously which can sometimes be hard to do, great job!
Can't wait for more!
Author's responseHi there Dondon,
Yes it was a very deep chapter.
Will Gerard come to an understanding that they're both trying to get Emily back? We'll see. But it's so true he couldn't choose some random name or the stripper he's been "seeing". Alyssa seemed the logical choice to him.
They're certainly going to try and get Emily out of there.
I was really nervous since Baby P incident becuase I had this in mind months. I'm glad you thought I handled it well.
Thanks for the review!!