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Harry meets Moody... Sparks fly!

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters: Harry - Published: 2008/12/10 - Updated: 2008/12/10 - 5468 words

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  (#) BJH 2008-12-10 01:09:12 PM

  Hermione, Moody, and now BILL WEASLEY!
  
  Harry has had quite an eventful day.
  
  BJH

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  (#) Cateagle 2008-12-10 02:06:14 PM

  Methinks Bill Weasley is going to have to swear a few oaths to avoid Obliviation. Moody can be trusted, as can Hermione, but Bill, at this point, is questionable. It should be interesting to see how the different parties react when they learn the full story.

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  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-12-10 03:21:19 PM

  Fairly good update, though there were a few errors. The most notable was the misspelling of ALASTOR Moody's first name.
  
  Looking forward to more.

  Author's response

  My mistake. I will correct this immediately! :)

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  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-12-10 04:15:51 PM

  Great part here, and really enjoyed the Harry/Hermione reunion, and could feel the heavy emotion coming through the page here, and loved how things went with them at the shop. Then the cliffie with Bill was interesting, and will look forward to what happen with him next time.

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  (#) darkdeva 2008-12-11 12:11:20 AM

  Bill will certainly be an interesting addition...Harry is really not ready for all of this.

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  (#) BJH 2008-12-11 05:15:41 AM

  You know, thinking about this, Miss Wood would be more likely to out Harry than Bill. It would be a trivial thing for the Goblins to use client priviledge to prevent Bill from saying anything but what happens when McGonagall asks the little girl how things went and how Hermione was doing?
  
  "It went well, Professor. Professor Granger met an old friend who was working at the shop. She seemed really surprised to see him; she was even crying. She called him Harry at first but he introduced himself as James Black."
  
  Would it even take a heartbeat for McG to figure that one out?
  
  BJH

  Author's response

  Are you looking over my shoulder at my notes again? :)
  
  Miss Wood will be seen again....

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  (#) Wolfric 2008-12-11 03:04:52 PM

  Good chapter. Thanks for writing. W.

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  (#) lycus 2008-12-11 04:26:18 PM

  I love it! You get Harry and Hermione together, sell Harrys wand, have a meeting with Moody, And have a run in with Bill. This chapter had everything, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

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  (#) johnapple 2008-12-12 11:25:03 AM

  Great chapter - wonderful story .
  So, Harry has sold a wand he made; to Doreen Wood. I feel as though this will be important in the future.
  Thank you. Have a safe and happy holiday please.

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  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-12-15 03:28:56 PM

  Very good chapter, glad he has Hermione back.
  
  gunny

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