(#) canustakemyheart 2008-12-24Ok, you might get two posts on this because ficwad is sucking right now.
Anyway, here's what I think I said the first time ...
I'm digging this story. You're doing great with the suspense, characterization and dialog. I loved the nurse talking with Mikey and the news cast at the end was spot on.
(#) iwillstakeyourheart 2008-12-24canustakemyheart told me I should read this one. I like it. It's nice to see a story with drama, and action and emotion that has nothing to do with "teenagers in love in high school" (yeah - not really into reading that type of stuff!). And of course, I gravitate towards, "the dark side" as well so I love a story where it's very possible that everything does not turn out "ok".
I like your dialog too.
Keep it up!
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