(#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-12-31Great idea, throwing a summary in at the beginning. This is a story where it's best to keep the facts straight.
I really enjoyed this update, particularly the Bill and Ron scenes. It's a pity that "Ginny" was able to figure them out so quickly. Still, progress is progress.
Looking forward to more.
Author's responseGracias, WAYES. That Bill/Ron scene was a killer one to write... that was my major delay, so I'm glad you liked it.
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