Sociopathic Gerard Way ends up on death row. Here, you're dead before they even pierce that first needle into your skin. This is it; this is hell.
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-01-03 05:01:25 PMHeh. Twisted. Really well done, imho though. Not everyone can write shit like this (I myself, am one of those people that can, so I feel like I can talk about it with authority or some strange thing). Loved the little bits of sick humor thrown in there - really makes for great insight into the mindset of the character. You've set up a nice original story line here ("What they do to guys like us ..." I can see might have been the spark, but you took the scissors and ran with them here) so it will be interesting to see where you take it.
Author's responseAw, man...I'm just gonna tell you this: don't expect too much. Thanks for reading.
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-01-04 02:31:55 PMEither way, I think you're a very good writer =D
Author's responseWell then, thank you =] I'm very glad you think so. I'm gonna try to write more, but I'm just waiting for the right inspiration to strike because...well, it would be disappointing if the second chapter was all bland you know?
(#) figilio_vampiri 2009-01-09 12:18:30 AMI am a sucker for your writing. It's so appealing! Sick humour like that, and characters like this Gerard intrigue me so much, it's a little odd. But I'm the type who'll read books of serial killers for pleasure. Some more of this would be amazing actually, even if you don't think much could come of it, I think you have the potential to take it far!
Author's responseThank you so much for reading my stuff, i could smother you, but I dunno, I'm still trying to find the approrpriate beginning for the next chapter...
- Yay! You're finally writing more stuff again! Your writing friggen /owns/, seriously. and here I was thinking you'd given in writing altogether!
You have to update.
Or I will run you over with a lawnmower haha. Nah I'm kidding.
Author's responseLol, danke sie. Like I said, I will write as soon as I decide where to start...
(#) ThreeCheersForMCR_x 2009-01-17 03:07:37 AMFuck.Me.Oh.My.God.
That was so fucking dark and twisted. Honestly, it made me shiver a little. How could Gerard be so...evil. And cold. And disturbed. How did you make him so cold, evil and disturbed? That is some talent there. I really liked it. Continue? Please? Wow.
Author's responseHi, thnak youu =] Yeah, it's not really talent, it's just random jitters of inspiration. And then it's gone and I'm stuck with one awesome chapter and the other ones are just...ew. I know this story is interesting and it's too open-ended if I leave it at this, but um...I dunno, maybe I'll have to. I'd rather have readers wonder what's gonna happen next than you know, like getting bored by the end of the next chapter.
Anyway, ily, you read like all my stories =] Write more of yours.
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-01-27 06:26:09 PMI swear by every curly, dark hair growing between my legs...wow man, that was HILARIOUS!
I really like this one..although i think its a good one-shot..just cos of the ending, hehe...hm, i wonder if it was Eliza he killed...day dreams
lol just kidding! im not THAT mean..oh hey uh..would you like to be in one of my stories?
Author's responseHeh, Lindsey, I expected. But Eliza? I didn't even think of that. And thanks to you, I've decided to leave this as a one shot. =]
And um...depends. What kinda story is it?