The Dreamcatcher makes his first move
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-01-19 03:03:47 AMGood chapter! I like the pacing ... it's very "comic-booky" lol
Author's responseThanks! I know it's kinda supposed to be quite melodramatic and snappy and stuff, but, some of this is really quite hard for me to write! I don't want to go into length detail that would slow it down or rush it and make no sense. This is a tricky one for me!
Thanks for reviewing, as ever!
(#) Fantasy_Fairy 2009-01-20 04:34:25 PMOh no!
Kill nameless driver guy, but not Bob! [ok, thats not right - i take it back. And i know his name is Ben.]
Maybe Bob'll warn the guys or something? Is he dead? Or about to die?..
Yeah, they're going to have to listen to Gerard some time. They're going to have to when society turns into a whole lot of crazy?
I wonder who the Dreamcather's rival is..do we know them already?..
Anyway, great job!
Author's responseHmmm... I want to answer your questions, but I can't without giving it all away! But you're right, they are going to have to listen to Gerard, but he's going to have to tone down the crazy before they do! Lol!
Thanks for reviewing!! Glad you're enjoying it!
- Hi there Sassy,
I loved this chapter when Gerard comes face to face with the monster he created.
I was sad Bob was the first MCR victim, but he usually is, LOL!!
I was reading that last chapter and couldn't help but think that somehow her was transported into the comic. I felt this way it was all black and white and he himself was white, like Gerard said only the inks were done. Oh well just a theory.
I'm definitely loving it!!
- Hi there Sassy,
If this review pops up again sorry but ficwad was bringing me back to the front page and I never know if it took or not.
I loved the fact that Gerard is coming face to face with the monster he created, and his reaction is to just kill him off.
I was sad that Bob was the first MCR victim, but he usually is LOL!!
I have a theory about what happened to Bob. I'm probably way off base. I think that the Dreamcatcher transported him into the comic book. You describe everything as black and white, and Bob as pale white. I was thinking this because Gerard said the comics were only inked in his interview. Maybe he's holding Bob so Gerard won't kill him off. Just a theory. I'm so loving this story.