Late night discussions
- This is a very fascinating and engrossing series. I like the focus on the Niwa and Hiwatari clans, the history behind them and the possible future that may occur. Satoshi is aloof and abrupt, yet smouldering too, and Daisuke is adorable and caring - so much in character. I even like Dark's observations and interjections - I tend to find it annoying in the manga, but you've made him funny and intriguing. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more!
- Hands down one of the best DNAngel fics I've stumbled across. It's already been pointed out, but you handle the conversations between Dai, Satoshi and thei respective counterparts wonderfully. And all the backstory you've given both clans is superb. I could go on for days about how much I like your story..but I'll hold off for later chapters.
Keep up the good work.
(#) QueenPhoenix 2005-05-19 01:19:04 PMBackground! Background is good. Helps set a nice scene. I think this may be one of those fics I like to call "classic", basically cuz they're these lovely (long) epics with loads of elaborate worlds 'n stuff... well, maybe a mini-epic, since it's not that long, but it's still feels like one. Also, all the epics I have read (one for "Inu-yasha" and one for "Outlaw Star") have canon pairings, classic boy/girl. AND THIS FIC HAS NO HARADA TWINS!!! ^_^ I love you.