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  (#) Cateagle 2009-01-20

  Not sure if this is an intro to a longer story or a one-shot, but it definitely works and I can't help but wonder if what he saw in Harry's eyes caused Albus' medical condition.

• No.

  (#) Visible_minority 2009-01-21

  You should definitely expand on this.
  When Harry says: "Is that it then?", that alone makes me curious about what he's going to do about the situation. I hope that this isn't just a one-shot, because I actually wanna see what you could do with this as an intro.

• No.

  (#) BenRG 2009-01-21

  A very intereresting look into the mind of Harry Potter that actually comes very close to the canon character (pre-book 6&7 wussification). He really is a Gryffindor at heart - he won't bend and won't break. If the rest of the world doesn't like it... ah, he can't please them all.
  
  Overall, I found this a very insightful and interesting story. I agree with Cateagle that you could take this further and write an alternate book 6 from the perspective of a 'no retreat, no surrender' take-charge Harry who won't simply let Dumbledore dictate the pace and proceedure. I also wonder how Harry being more focussed on the war and less on being 'normal' could change the subplots of HBP, especially countering Malfoy's plots and his relationships with Ron, Ginny and Hermione.
  
  BenRG's Rating: 7.5/10

• No.

  (#) DrT 2009-01-21

  I also agree with the first three reviewers. This is the Harry of books 1-4 and a few parts of book 5 (and maybe a few sentences of book 7).

• No.

  (#) superharrypotterfan 2009-01-21

  very good idea should continue it though

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  (#) AnnF 2009-01-23

  Formatting is a bit off.

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