After the Final Battle, harry potter, with the help of 2 close friends tries to carry on with his life. But a prank from a now deceased wizard has far reaching consequences for him and those around...
(#) trooper103 2010-07-21 12:03:02 AMMy only criticism: Please, actually spell out the word "and". Stop using "&" because it isn't proper to use in a story. If you can't be bothered to spell out something so simple, you are telling readers that you don't care about the quality of your writing. If you don't have a beta reader I recommend you find one.
Author's responseTrue and I got a beta for chapter 4. Sorry but I've been unable to correct my previous chapters.