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Chapter 3: Three Funerals, a will, and a Snape!

by dennisud 12 Reviews

After the Final Battle, harry potter, with the help of 2 close friends tries to carry on with his life. But a prank from a now deceased wizard has far reaching consequences for him and those around...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Harry,Hermione,Luna,Narcissa,Ron,Snape - Warnings: [X] [?] - Published: 2009/01/04 - Updated: 2010/01/21 - 3935 words

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  • The Wizard's Triad

    (#) Celexs 2010-06-28 07:40:51 AM

    The reading of Snape's will should be entertaining. I look forward to the next update.

    Cel

    Author's response

    Check now! Chapter 4 is now up!
  • The Wizard's Triad

    (#) trooper103 2010-07-21 12:03:02 AM

    My only criticism: Please, actually spell out the word "and". Stop using "&" because it isn't proper to use in a story. If you can't be bothered to spell out something so simple, you are telling readers that you don't care about the quality of your writing. If you don't have a beta reader I recommend you find one.

    Author's response

    True and I got a beta for chapter 4. Sorry but I've been unable to correct my previous chapters.

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