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Chapter 3: Three Funerals, a will, and a Snape!
12 ReviewsAfter the Final Battle, harry potter, with the help of 2 close friends tries to carry on with his life. But a prank from a now deceased wizard has far reaching consequences for him and those around...
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The Wizard's Triad
(#) Celexs 2010-06-28 07:40:51 AM
The reading of Snape's will should be entertaining. I look forward to the next update.
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Check now! Chapter 4 is now up! -
The Wizard's Triad
(#) trooper103 2010-07-21 12:03:02 AM
My only criticism: Please, actually spell out the word "and". Stop using "&" because it isn't proper to use in a story. If you can't be bothered to spell out something so simple, you are telling readers that you don't care about the quality of your writing. If you don't have a beta reader I recommend you find one.Author's response
True and I got a beta for chapter 4. Sorry but I've been unable to correct my previous chapters.