Ten years post-Hogwarts, Ginny and Ron have been murdered, and Hermione is the prime suspect.
- Okay, I remember this one and it's a good one. If she can't continue it, I'm glad you are. One question, though, isn't it "Kreacher" and not "Kreature"? Other than that, it's a good introductory chapter that grabs the reader by the collar and drags them in.
Author's responseLike I said, it was the cookies, warm, soft, melt in your mouth oatmeal cashew raisin cookies.
Good call on the spelling, Kreacher it is!
- Well, I'm glad if she wasn't able to continue the story that at least she could convince you to. I look forward to seeing what you do with the rewrite. Wish Guitargurl the best of luck and we hope to see her writing again when possible.
Author's responseThank you for the encouraging words, I'll try to nudge GuitarGurl back into writing - maybe play on her Catholic guilt. . .
- My biggest complaint about this story is that they are treating the deaths of Ron and Ginny as a crime. So far, I like the action of the first capter and look forward to more.
I wish GuitarGurl nothing but the best and hope her life straightens out to her liking. If it includes writing, great, but if it doesn't, I just hope she is happy.
Author's responseThax for reading and reviewing.
Two people have been violently killed, so the assumption is that they were both murdered.
Guitar Gurl reads the reviews and I know she'll be warmed by your concern.
It's been a few months and we keep in touch. She may start writing again but has made it clear the Battered Hearts is mine to finish.
I'll do my best.