Dash takes protecting people to far when he gets a power that has been lock inside him for some time will he risk he life for his family or doom The Incredilbes to their death
- A run through spellchecker would do this chapter some good.
So far this story is okay as a scriptfic, but you might want to look up some playwrighting style manuals. It might help you describe your scenes.
Just call him "Jimmy" from the start.
Author\'s Response: spell checker is one thing i dont have on my hard drive but i'll see what i can do thanks again ^_^