(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-02-22thanks for updating!
you know i love this story. Egan is really struggling isn't she. as much as she annoys me for being like that, i can totally understand.
poor Gerard, he really is suffering. bless Bob for trying to talk to him about it. i want Gerard and Egan to succeed, but things look pretty bleak at the moment! i can also totally understand Gerard's frustration with the situation.
anyway, great update, thanks!
Author's responseEgan really is struggling right now, and to compensate, she's being blasé. And as you saw, that pissed Gerard off pretty badly. She's pissing me off too, actually.
It's interesting you saw Bob like that, as the good guy I mean. If I had been the one reading, I might not have seen it like that.
I don't know what to tell you about a happy ending.
Thank you so much for reviewing :] It means a lot to me.
(#) princessofthedark 2009-02-22well this is the first time that I am reviewing, but I have good reason as this is the first time that I stumbled across this story.
Honestly when i read some of these fics I read the first chapter and it will either make it or break it for me.
Your story kept me going. I was tired when I started reading this at 10.40pm now Im wide awake and its 2.08am.
Firstly I think that you have an amazing talent. This story is written so well, I can not find fault to it at all.
The story has been a fantastic read and had kept me guessing, and in a way I am a little disappointed that this was the last post, I wanted to read some more.
I enjoy the drama that you have created between egan and gerard, though I would like to see them reach some what of a happy ending, but ur in charge and you are the master of these puppets.
I look forward to ur next update, which I hope will not be to far off. I will do my best to rate and review.
Keep up the excellent work, you now have you urself a devoted fan.
Author's responseI do exactly the same thing with stories. You have exactly one shot to make me a reader.
Wow! You read it all in one go! I was up around two as well, just being useless and writing stuff :]
I like to think the story is unexpected, so thank you for reaffirming that belief. It means an awful lot to know that other people like what I write.
And I'm very, very glad to have you as a new fan. Thank you for the read and review.
- Now you have me confused about how I feel about Bob. He has the right intentions and is just trying to help so I have to like him, but he is telling Gerard and Egan not to be together! Excuse me! Does he know how long it took them to get together in the first place? Just let them be, and quit meddling!
I'm pretty sure that about 50% of this story takes place in a hospital. It seems like it gives all the characters a chance to regroup.
Amazing as usual!
Author's responseBob. Hmm. I don't really know how I feel about him either. I wrote the phone conversation in the way that he was supposed to be an antagonist, but now I don't know...
Yes, I've noticed that someone's usually hanging out in the hospital, needing some kind of medical attention. That's just the way they roll.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
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