Categories > Celebrities > Fall Out Boy > Hustle
Chapter Two
7 ReviewsDon't try this on an unsuspecting coffee shop owner kids, I don't want you all getting arrested.
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(#) falloutbaby89 2009-02-23 12:18:23 PM
Haha, TOOK a while for Patrick to figure it out! That was so cute of him though.
Thank you for updating so soon. I'm sorry if I sounded like a pest but I really like this story cause not only are you a good writer, but you seemed to have done your research well too. It's appreciative. What she did with Joe was classic. I hope you don't mind if I steal your idea because I am in need of cash. Lol. Can't wait for the next update -
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(#) silver_stripes 2009-02-23 06:20:22 PM
Lol, confused Patrick. That was funny. Thanks for updating! -
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(#) killxsmile 2009-02-23 10:03:02 PM
lol. I don't mind the self-advertising on my reviews. I'm actually pretty flattered that an author such as yourself is reading what I write. Anyways, this story you have here definitely deserves more readers/reviewers. I'm really liking the original plotline. And the fact that the main character is not head over heels for the p33n. Update soon! -
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(#) XxLiveyourlifExX 2009-02-24 11:07:47 AM
this story is spectacular! I can't wait for more!!!
love,
Corri ElizaBeth -
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(#) xx_eddi_xx 2009-03-01 06:24:11 AM
ah! review 5! i feel smiley! XD
i think i'm gonna read all of your stuff. you got this talent i like and i want more of it.
update soon?