if you are not in with the whole m/m thing then don't read this cuz this is a Eclipse/Raenef fic. First this is a Eclipse POV soo arg i soo suck a summaries.
Please please make more paragraphs! I think if you plot out the direction of the story more you could do a lot better. Make paragraphs, expand more upon ideas, etc. I love the pairing! But please, try building up to things. :)
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