Gerard's struggles with his herion addicted girlfriend Riley and his own guilt for introducing her to it is driving him insane. Will he be able to overcome his demons and help her overcome hers? co...
(#) RocketQueen1 2009-01-27 08:37:26 PMSounds like a good start so far. :]
Just a couple of things;
It might help to run a final spell check, or read over it yourself, I noticed a couple of mistakes.
Also, it gets kinda hard to read text in a big block like that, so it might help to use paragraphs, or to insert a line break every so often to break it up a bit.
If you want any more help, or would like a Beta Reader, feel free to PM me. :)