Harry has retreated behind the walls of his occlumency and gets a rude awakening from those who love him.
- the last two chapters are posted in reverse order. at least i hope they are :) I love the story and cant wait to find out whats actually going on with the cognivore. Anyways i look forward to the next chapters.
Author's responseYep, I know. FicWad scrambled the order.
(#) FroggyPrince 2009-04-07 04:24:18 AMOkay, the sequence is fixed, and wow, what a chapter. I went through the whole gamut of emotions, I wanted to scream at Harry for retreating into his shell, and cheer Hermione for calling him out on it and Neville for kicking his ass!
The scene in the Muggle Liaison Office was priceless!
Now, just fix the last chappie and it's all good.
Author's responseGlad you found it enjoyable - stay tuned, more to come.
I love this story, it has heart and tension and romance. I want to see Harry and Hermione together, and I think they are well on their way.
Maybe they have waited long enough?
Let there be love.
It's funny you should say that, in the next chapter someone says, "Haven't we waited long enough?"
I guess great minds think alike.
Seni Seviyourum, Tatlem.
(#) GryffindorDragon 2009-04-19 12:29:01 PMMolly's actions leave some questions. Is what she said about Wizard customs true or is she stating her own ideas (or a narrow portion of wizardry)? Or is she deliberately misleading Harry? If she is doing that, one wonders whether she is playing a role with the cognivores -- both actions, after all, are evil.
Author's responseVery good points all around here. Molly has a slightly different view of the world, but remember, she's suffered so many loses - her brothers, two of her sons and her only daughter. Perhaps it's her coping mechanism.