“Shhhhh. You’ll wake up the prey- I mean Gerard. Go down stairs. Mikey made coffee.” The hunter enticed his foolish victim.
- Ohh write the nest one.
Yushh Frankie :D
Author's responseI love Frankie too!! Though that is slightly obvious. I really like writing from his point of view though I may switch to Gee soon just to mix things up a bit.
I hope to write the next one real soon, I just have to find some time to be on the computer.
Thanks so much for reviewing! You guys are the best!!
- Lol. Still funny. Keep going.
Not much help, I know, but the story really isn't 'deep' enough to offer any constructive criticism...
Author's responseThat's okay!!! Just getting a review makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!!!