Harry met an interesting man during his seventh winter: Fenrir Greyback.
Very interesting so far. I like werewolf!Harry stories, which there are few of. Good ones at least. I pictured Fenrir being more gruff, like Wolverine from X-men perhaps. I like your different take on lycanthropy as well.
Looks real good so far. Fenrir's portrait is something new. Good scene with Molly+Ron, this way makes much more sense than JKR's simpering.
I'm very much interested in just what You've go in stock for the future in this story.
-chuckle- Now that was a different Fenir Greyback; I'm presuming this one "mellowed out" a bit after Tommy-boy's first bodily defeat - though he's still creating more weres, just with a bit more selectivity and sensitivity. It should be quite interesting to see the reaction when Harry and Remus meet up as Remus meets a stronger Alpha than Dumbles (who's likely to be driven to distraction by a Harry who's rather out of his control). It's a good enough start that I'm looking forward to future chapters.
Great start.. Hope to read more..
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