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Part 1: Kenishi's Tale

by MarkPoa 1 Reviews

In a desolate post-apocalyptic landscape, a pair of adventurers search for the survivors of Otakuland.

Category: Sci-Fi - Rating: PG - Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor, Parody, Romance, Sci-fi - Characters:  - Published: 2006/03/28 - Updated: 2006/03/28 - 7092 words

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  • FAQing Hostile: The Sword and the Sheath

    (#) fruit_addict 2007-03-19 04:42:23 PM

    Hey great chapter. I liked how you gradually introduced the characters and their appearance. Gave a bit of suspence. There were a few spelling mistakes and grammer/wording errors though. In one of the character's names some of the time it had two 'g's and others it only had one. Also, I doubt this is what you meant but if you did mean the Hawaii island when you said, 'kawaii' then it is spelt wrong.

    Author's response

    It's actually "kawaii" meaning "cute" in Japanese. It's a term commonly used by American anime fans as well.

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