Kenishi's in danger. His only hope is his loving wife, Arashi. There's more to this lady than meets the eye.
(#) fruit_addict 2007-03-19 05:49:11 PMThat was a great story. You need to watch your tenses though. You switched from past to present alot.
Author's responseThanks. I'll have to look into that. This work was an experiment in first-person writing, so I may have botched it a few times. :)