"Have you ever picked up a girl who wasn't won over by a smile and a line?"
this is very original!
I love it!
im soo gonna rate it!
I really like this!
really looking forward to the next part.
Amazing! Cannot wait until the next part! >.<
Haven't got any pick up line ideas sorry lmfao, but anyway.. i am gonna go rate this! (: x
I loved this.
Characters = mega win.
Brendon and Jenna are effin' hilarious. Best... two-shot? ever.
Wow...as cheesy as pick up lines are...definately a conversation starter in this one.
That duct tape skirt would definately hurt.
Can't wait for the second part! (Or is it already up and I'm being blind and not seeing it...)
(#) iluvsmiliez 2009-04-15 05:59:52 PM
I agree with the 4th reviewer.
I totally rated thisss. :D
(#) lovetah 2009-04-16 07:53:28 AM
wow this is really something new, I love it!
the beginning is great.. update soon! can't wait to find out where this'll lead to... though I have an idea :D but Jenna is gonna be pretty tough for Brendon to cope with ;)
very well written, very original, and i liked how you added a little humor in there!