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Pickup Lines
8 reviews"Have you ever picked up a girl who wasn't won over by a smile and a line?"
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Pickup Lines
(#) harlequingirl-x 2009-04-14
this is very original!
I love it!
im soo gonna rate it!
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(#) girlinthemoon 2009-04-14
I really like this!
really looking forward to the next part.Pickup Lines
(#) MyChemicalFangirl 2009-04-14
Amazing! Cannot wait until the next part! >.<
Haven't got any pick up line ideas sorry lmfao, but anyway.. i am gonna go rate this! (: xPickup Lines
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2009-04-15
I loved this.
Characters = mega win.
Brendon and Jenna are effin' hilarious. Best... two-shot? ever.
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(#) somethingorother 2009-04-15
Wow...as cheesy as pick up lines are...definately a conversation starter in this one.
That duct tape skirt would definately hurt.
Amazing!
Can't wait for the second part! (Or is it already up and I'm being blind and not seeing it...)Pickup Lines
(#) iluvsmiliez 2009-04-15
This winz.
I agree with the 4th reviewer.
I totally rated thisss. :DPickup Lines
(#) lovetah 2009-04-16
wow this is really something new, I love it!
the beginning is great.. update soon! can't wait to find out where this'll lead to... though I have an idea :D but Jenna is gonna be pretty tough for Brendon to cope with ;)Pickup Lines
(#) -gabrielleanne 2009-10-08
very well written, very original, and i liked how you added a little humor in there!
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