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Chapter 3 - A Battle Unfought

Saving Family... The Battle that wasn't

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2009/04/21 - Updated: 2009/04/21 - 1376 words

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  (#) javacap 2009-04-21 10:07:24 AM

  I hope that you make this a harry/lily story with maybe hermione and fleur joining them

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  (#) NERVSGC 2009-04-21 10:22:53 AM

  please update soon, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

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  (#) Slayer89 2009-04-21 11:04:54 AM

  Good chapter, i like this story, and also would like Harry/Lily

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  (#) zaxxon 2009-04-21 11:56:55 AM

  Very interesting...
  
  I don't recall a Sirius/Amelia match-up before, but then, why not.
  
  I look forward to more.

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  (#) jabarber69 2009-04-21 01:11:34 PM

  Hey great story, for some reason I dont seem to have ever read this one before? but anyway hope you can find the time to update again this year!

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  Har har hardy har har :D

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  (#) Trini_Randy 2009-04-21 04:54:36 PM

  I'm looking forward to a Harry/Lily story, but please on all that is fanfiction continue this story past the 3rd chapter, unlike your other stories, this one is looking very exciting, and we don't want to see it stop

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  (#) Elfwyn 2009-04-21 05:12:02 PM

  Great start to a different HP fic. Can't wait to see the results in a grown Harry.

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  (#) Nautilus 2009-04-22 12:10:53 AM

  a little early for establishing ships, but i do like the ideas so far.
  
  though, is it just me or are you switching from present to past tense every now and then.
  
  some of the details need more attention, i think. just so we have a better image of exactly what it is you are trying to say.
  
  you also seem to be jumping a little bit, the dialogue wasn't really smooth between lily, sirius and amelia.
  
  otherwise really good and i look forward to see the story (and you)progress in to something brilliant, it (you) definitely has (have) the potential. congrats.

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  (#) johnnybravo 2009-04-22 08:04:56 AM

  crazy story....it's been awhile since you updated the story (not including this update).

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  (#) bemeka 2009-04-22 08:03:17 PM

  I like this - and the pairing of Sirius and Amelia seems interesting, Lily and Harry as Dhampire leaves all sorts of possibilites for the future and what abilities they have or will have. Really looking forward to where you take this hope you update soon

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