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chapter 11
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(#) Black_s_Phoenix 2006-03-29 06:56:11 PM
Kick ass. I like the animagus thing and how Harry is going about learning about the chamber.
Author\'s Response: Thank you. As an interesting side note: "Kick ass!" was going to be the last line of the chapter, but I thought "Hell yeah!" had more umph. -
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(#) Shobs 2006-03-30 12:46:46 AM
The story text "blocked" together in this chapter. It made it a bit more difficult to read, but not any less enjoyable.
Thank you.
Author\'s Response: Sorry about that. I didn't realize that that had happened. I've fixed the problem. Thanks for the kind words. -
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(#) Shaggy37 2006-07-31 01:37:17 PM
I didn't know humans could have a dragon as there animangus, anyways AWESOME STORY, love it, this is the first time I've ever seen somebody use a Black Dragon as the Animangus, do keep up the outstadning work:):):):)Author's response
I put in an explanation as to why he is the dragon. I am glad you like it. Thanks for the review.