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Part 2

Harry wakes up in France.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Humor - Characters: Harry - Warnings: [!] [!!] [!!!] [V] [X] [R] [?] [Y] - Published: 2009/04/29 - Updated: 2009/04/29 - 7395 words - Complete

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  (#) rtc5873 2009-04-29 02:43:32 PM

  The frist two chapters are very good. Are you going to put Hermione in the mix with Harry and Gabrielle?
  
  Keep up the good work.
  John

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  (#) LordBlack79 2009-04-29 02:44:46 PM

  Another great chapter! Keep up the great work.

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  (#) red_jacobson 2009-04-29 03:06:27 PM

  I'm thrilled to see an update! I was afraid you were just going to leave the story with one chapter, and that would have been very much of the bad!
  
  Always a pleasure to see Sirius as a free man, and I can't hardly wait to see the spanking that Dumbledore is going to be receiving! GRIN
  
  More soon please?
  
  red
  
  PS: I tried to rate the story, but it was already at a 5 so I couldn't rate it any higher, darnit!

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  (#) RavenPuck 2009-04-29 04:20:33 PM

  i hope u update soon and i hope u dont turn this in to a harry/hermione/gabby fic i hope u jsut keep it at harry/gabby there is to few of them out there mybe u can have hermoine go with fleur or some one

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  (#) pi3142 2009-04-29 04:34:21 PM

  I see good progress. I hope you've mapped it all out and don't lose sight of the goals.

  Author's response

  Here's a big hint. The story is done. I learned my lesson on motorcycle. I need to finish it then post.

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  (#) jabarber69 2009-04-29 05:19:32 PM

  so what they are married now or what! and as for hermione is she going to be homeschooled now or go to beaubatoms with harry maybe...she and harry/gabby could be a threesome! dont mind me pervert here!

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  (#) DJ32 2009-04-29 06:14:11 PM

  Nice work keep it going. I look forward to the rest.

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  (#) Wonderbee31 2009-04-29 07:02:47 PM

  Nice section here, and looking forward to what this will mean for Hermione and her possible escape, along with Harry and his new relationship with Gab.

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  (#) Cateagle 2009-04-29 08:25:39 PM

  Very nice, I love how Sirius is now a free man and the British Ministry can't do a thing about it. Meanwhile, that's an interesting and unique approach for healing Harry; it certainly makes him and Gabrielle more fit for each other. I rather enjoyed the section with Hermione and her family and I suspect that's going to cause Albus no end of trouble, too. Meanwhile, the fact that folks are noticing that programmed manipulation is likely going to have interesting ramifications later on.

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  (#) BJH 2009-04-29 08:31:58 PM

  Really interesting, with one little phrase you turned a cute and amusing Gabrielle mates with Harry because he saved her story and turned it into a much more complex and compelling read.
  
  That phrase?
  
  "Great man, Dumbledore"
  
  You've taken a cheesy line from a secondary player in canon and used it as the keystone to what could be a very interesting plot.
  
  Really well done.
  
  BJH
  
  P.S. Even though I like and look forward to a Harry that can fly using his own wings, and the fireball thing could be fun, please avoid making him superpowered. What fun is a story when the hero is unbeatable. It that made good stories then we would all be writing stories about Albus pre-Harry, eh?

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